What’s Working Well:
Hook: The “I lost a lot, bro…” opener is personal and pulls the reader in right away.
Narrative Arc: You show a journey — from mistakes to growth — which builds trust and credibility.
Structure: The 3-step breakdown makes your transformation digestible.
Tone: Conversational and real, which is perfect for platforms like Twitter, IG, or LinkedIn.
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Suggestions for Enhancement:
1. Clarity on the Strategy Percentages: Add a clarifying note like “based on risk appetite” or “not financial advice” to manage expectations.
> Example:
“This isn’t a one-size-fits-all — but here’s what worked for me.”
2. Minor Phrasing Tweaks: Instead of "End result? My wallet cried.", you could say:
> “End result? My wallet bled. Hard.” (adds a punch and crypto meme alignment)
Or for humor:
> “End result? My wallet checked into rehab.”
3. Stronger Closing CTA: The final ask is good but could be tighter: